The Lock – by John Linton
- December 15th, 2009
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The boy had often wondered what was contained within the old man’s piece of furniture. He had been delivering papers for him for two years now and each week the old man would answer the knock on the door and allow the boy to stand in the doorway while he counted out the change he was to receive. The beat up old piece of furniture with its incredibly old lock didn’t look like it would put up much of a fight. What could the old man possibly have inside there?
He had heard rumors that the old man had survived the Great Depression and kept all his money rolled up in big wads and stored in coffee tins. Thousands of dollars, some said. Even though the house looked like it hadn’t been taken care of in a very long time, the old man must have had money to be able to afford to buy that Terrier of his a roast every couple of days to eat. That damn dog ate better than anyone the boy knew.
God knows the old man’s relatives thought he had money stashed away somewhere in the house. The old man said he didn’t like any of them. They didn’t care about him or the dog, he said, just visited every now and then in the hopes they would be mentioned in the will. “I like you.” he said to the boy, “You take the time to leave the paper by the door so I don’t have to walk to the street to get it.”
The next week, when the boy knocked on the door the dog barked, but the old man didn’t come to the door. The boy turned the knob and to his surprise the door opened and the dog jumped up at him excitedly. In the corner of the room the old man sat slumped in a chair. The old lock seemed to be taunting the boy.
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Such a great story… Full of anticipation and emotion!
Beautiful image, detail and tones, John and the story fits it perfectly!!!
Tell me the boy did not care about the money, and that his only concern was the old man. Perhaps the lock taunted the boy because the old man had a stash of Oreo cookies inside!!!
Beautiful photo – superb b&w tones! How evocative such a simple old lock is, after all. And the story is perfect: ending in another secret, which is, possibly even greater than the one behind the lock.
Splendid! Cool image and very nice macabre undertones.
Yes, I too want to know what happens. Such a good story and shot. Bravo! Encore!
And then what happened? I really wanna know what was in that trunk, John – diamonds? rubies? emeralds? what?! I hafta know!
Nicely expressed both ways. The tale is excellent and the shot illustrates perfectly the story
Magical story and amazing photo John……most Excellent ~ !!!
Hey, wait a minute. What happened to my description…you know, the part that says I’m a floundering member. It took me hours to think that up.
Beautifully expressed both visually & orally…You are indeed a master of spinning tales. Great work John.
gosh… this is a wonderful story. You do have such a way with words…
You are a master storyteller. The image is a beauty and a perfect complement to the story.
John always seems to be able to find the perfect words to capture the truth behind his beautiful work…..
Excellent contribution to the Secret Project John and I love the image.